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Elements RS Prologue Pg-11 by Hyena27

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I really like the way you set this up, the dragon in the first panel looks strong but like he's going to die, it really makes for a sad but inspiring impact, the second panel shows originaility in the way you used what he was saying in the background, however although I love the detail in the scales there are some times where that could be confusing to the viewer, so perhaps if you found a way to dull down the scales a tad it would leave more attention to the eyes and what they're saying instead of drawing it all into to detail of the scales.
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Hyena27 Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! Good I was trying to convey that:) I see what you mean. That would be tough but to do. I thought of outlining the scales in the color of the scales themselves but I can never find the right size pens that are the same color:/
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OwlknightOfTheFey Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh i know what u mean, idk how many prismacolor pencils i've killed because i had to keep sharpening them to keep the edge for scale drawings
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Hyena27 Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol. I've killed quite a few too
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OwlknightOfTheFey Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
well at least they're fairly cheap to buy replacements... but dear lord FINDING those replacements takes forever
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Hyena27 Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's so true! I tend to break the lead a lot too:/ why do I press so hard
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OwlknightOfTheFey Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh to fix that just be careful not to tap and or drop the pencils, also getting quality led helps
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Hyena27 Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I dropped them a lot:/
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OwlknightOfTheFey Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah... see this is where u get a REALLY good pencil case (i got a new one that i love and i'll be posting pics soon enough) and u don't put it in the bottem of your backpack, or drop the case, the case is ur baby, would u drop your baby? and keep that mentality while ur arts stuff is in there
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